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some poems of being alone

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  • Sorry in advance, they are quite dark, but its how i have felt, trapped, lost, alone. I think many people feel this way at some point. Maybe some on here still do, and it feels a very lonely place to be.

     

    I want to show people they are not alone, and there is hope. today i am very accepting of who i am. i wont fight against it any more. I'm not sure the world is ready yet, nor my family, but i have a few very good friends who know, and accept, and that is the best feeling in the world.

     

    I will write a few more over the next few weeks, reflecting who i am, how i feel. Happier ones lol. xx

     

     

     

    Am i alone, is anyone there?

    i need to reach out, and know that you care.

    Day after day i spend staring to space,

    from the mirrow i see, that pale blank face.

     

    i dream of a land,

    far far from here.

    no existence of suffering,

    or pain, or fear..

     

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    No locked doors hold me in this hell,

    No windows barred, so who can tell.

    Why i'm still here, such pain and hate,

    Its been too long, now its too late.

     

    I want to break free, i wish i could,

    But they've captured my soul,

    I'm here for good.

     

     

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      May 28, 2013 12:08 PM BST
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  • These verses sound like being imprisoned by fear. If I'm interpreting correctly, a lot of us on this forum have been there.

    I hate the feeling.

    Intellectually, I know that there's less to fear "out there" than there would be locked in a metaphorical cage flinching and jumping away from nothing, but...

    feelings are feelings.

     

    Thanks for sharing.

      May 29, 2013 6:17 PM BST
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  • xxx This post was edited by Rosaleigh Verna marh at July 17, 2013 1:19 PM BST
      July 17, 2013 12:50 AM BST
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  • Bless you that's lovely you got tallentx This post was edited by Rosaleigh Verna marh at July 17, 2013 1:22 PM BST
      July 17, 2013 1:14 AM BST
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  • poems are a great way to express ones feeling,

    I wish more people had the guts to express their feelings.

    im feeling inspired to start writing again.

    I love this poem and can really relate, Thanks :)

      April 27, 2014 6:57 PM BST
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