Poetry, Please !

    • 315 posts
    September 5, 2008 7:09 AM BST

    Hi, Girls,

    Poetry can be Romantic, Inspiring, Pastoral, Humorous, Sad ............................ you name it, there's poetry out there to fit that mood.

    So, I'm sure, at some time, you've come across a poem that perfectly fitted your emotions, or there's a particular poem that, for some reason, you hold in your heart, as a favourite.
    If so, why not post it here, so that we can all take some inspiration from it, as you have.

    To sum up what poetry is, I recently came across this little piece by Edmund Vance Cooke (1866-1932), a Canadian poet.

    Poetry ..................

    To deftly do what many dimly think:
    To fund a feeling for the world to borrow:
    To turn a tear to printer's ink:
    To make a sonnet of a sorrow.

    So, let's hear about verse that has given you some "lift", or summed up the emotions you feel.

    Hugs,
    Angela. xx.
    • 6 posts
    September 5, 2008 9:24 AM BST
    Hi Angela
    I dont know if sad poems are what you want but here are a few I made myself . Im a softy at heart

    Bernie

    From the heart

    On one cold wet and windy day
    The angels took my love away
    Now every night I sit and stare
    At the night skies shimmering glare
    How I wonder if you’re up above
    Still think of me your first true love.

    Please forgive my sorry stare
    But my darling I miss u dear
    I know one day well meet again
    But why does my heart still the feel pain

    Oh dear lord upon on high
    Please hear me when I cry
    Please protect the one I love
    Till we meet again above


    A Rose

    I gave you a rose but once a year
    To show how much I loved you dear
    Now you left and went away
    My heart sinks lower every day


    War

    A shout goes up
    I hear them sigh
    I hear a mother weep and cry
    Her son was lost on this wet day
    Lying dying in the clay

    No one said war was fun
    No one smiled when we had won
    A thousand souls took away
    One cold and wet November’s day



    • 315 posts
    September 11, 2008 11:32 AM BST

    This poem, "The Greening of the Trees (remembering 9/11)", was written by Sandra Saer.

    In her own words ..................
    "It reflects the misery and loss felt on both sides of the Atlantic, and, indeed, much further afield, but also the deep, universal need to look forward with hope, however difficult that may be".

    The Greening of the Trees (remembering 9/11).
    By Sandra Saer.

    Perched on a rounded thicket just outside,
    Two little birds arrive,
    Making the thin branches
    Bend and tremble with their weight.
    One nears the other, and the other wavers,
    then, coyly, darts to another branch.
    The suitor follows, not to be put off.
    (Birds know their customs; know their ladyfolk),
    And soon, the two are hunched together
    just as one, lurching on a slim twig
    that barely holds their longing.

    This is spring.
    We are remembering
    the miseries of terrorism, war and death.
    And yet, spring's gilded breath
    heartens the world, unbidden.
    Plants peer out; swoop out
    from a warming earth.

    Two birds sing, make love,
    and reassure
    those who have lost sight of
    all such joys,
    and the delightful noise of love,
    that many of us have known,
    just like these.

    So we wait, in hope,
    for the greening of the trees.


    Hugs,
    Angela. xx.
    • 236 posts
    September 12, 2008 1:11 AM BST
    Dannique.
    that song is by Rush fom the album HEMISPHERES. entiled Trees.


    ok one of my own.

    Where .?

    Where is the one for me ?
    Do I pass you in the street unseen ?
    Are you in the next carrige on this train?
    When I walk do you run ?

    Do we live in different towns ?
    Have I seen you every day ?
    When I play my role in this,lifes play
    will I remember the lines to say ?

    If I hitched to a festival or walked by foot.  
    Would it be you who would hoot but not
    stop ?
    All these Islands fixed yet free
    Will an Island bump into me ?


    Life is so much like a tree
    All the bifurcating branches reaching for
    the sky
    Yet some are hidden and know no fruits
    Whilst others just seem to abound with
    the horn of plenty some way of the .
    ground


    My feet rest in the earth my head in the
    clouds
    perhaps this is why I cannot see when
    you come round
    to call on my door.If it is just,call me
    again I'll lower my
    head and unearth my feet just so
    we can meet.

    Sarah A Slavin 1980
    • 1912 posts
    September 18, 2008 12:33 PM BST
    I was shocked, confused, bewildered
    As I entered Heaven's door,
    Not by the beauty of it all,
    Nor the lights or its decor.

    But it was the folks in Heaven
    Who made me sputter and gasp--
    The thieves, the liars, the sinners,
    The alcoholics and the trash.

    There stood the kid from seventh grade
    Who swiped my lunch money twice.
    Next to him was my old neighbor
    Who never said anything nice.

    Bob, who I always thought
    Was rotting away in hell,
    Was sitting pretty on cloud nine,
    Looking incredibly well.

    I nudged Jesus, 'What's the deal?
    I would love to hear Your take.
    How'd all these sinners get up here?
    God must've made a mistake.

    And why's everyone so quiet,
    So somber - give me a clue.'
    'Hush, child,' He said, 'they're all in shock.
    No one thought they'd be seeing you.'

    JUDGE NOT.
    • 2017 posts
    September 7, 2008 8:08 PM BST
    It's not poetry but it's moving all the same.

    Paschendale

    In a foreign field he lay
    lonely soldier unknown grave
    on his dying words he prays
    tell the world of Paschendale

    Relive all that he's been through
    last communion of his soul
    rust your bullets with his tears
    let me tell you 'bout his years

    Laying low in a blood filled trench
    killing time 'til my very own death
    on my face I can feel the falling rain
    never see my friends again
    in the smoke, in the mud and lead
    smell of fear and feeling of dread
    soon be time to go over the wall
    rapid fire and the end of us all

    Whistles, shouts and more gun fire
    lifeless bodies hang on barbwire
    battlefield nothing but a bloody tomb
    be reunited with my dead friends soon
    many soldiers eighteen years
    drown in mud, no more tears
    surely a war no one can win
    killing time about to begin

    Home, far away. From the war, a chance to live again
    Home, far away. But the war, no chance to live again

    The bodies of ours and our foes
    the sea of death it overflows
    in no man's land God only knows
    into jaws of death we go...

    Crucified as if on a cross
    allied troops, they mourn their loss
    German war propaganda machine
    such before has never been seen
    swear I heard the angels cry
    pray to God no more may die
    so that people know the truth
    tell the tale of Paschendale

    Cruelty has a human heart
    everyman does play his part
    terror of the men we kill
    the human heart is hungry still

    I stand my ground for the very last time
    gun is ready as I stand in line
    nervous wait for the whistle to blow
    rush of blood and over we go...

    Blood is falling like the rain
    its crimson cloak unveils again
    the sound of guns can't hide their shame
    and so we die in Paschendale

    Dodging shrapnel and barbwire
    running straight at cannon fire
    running blind as I hold my breath
    say a prayer symphony of death
    as we charge the enemy lines
    a burst of fire and we go down
    I choke a cry but no one hears
    feel the blood go down my throat

    Home, far away. From the war, a chance to live again
    Home, far away. But the war, no chance to live again
    Home, far away. From the war, a chance to live again
    Home, far away. But the war, no chance to live again

    See my spirit on the wind
    across the lines beyond the hill
    friend and foe will meet again
    those who died at Paschendale