A Poem for us all.

  • September 3, 2009 10:19 PM BST
    Hi girls,

    Don't know if you like this kind of thing, but this is loosely based around my feelings:

    She sneaks a look as tentacles of light surround her
    Slithers of diaphanous whisps address the cold
    Sensations of solicitous pleasure glide controlled
    Crossing bodies, smooth from care intent
    Red glimpses of solitary patches caressing silks
    Pursed lips pleasure tongues of hopelessness
    Brocaded slips clasp slim shoulders of despair
    Low swings of happiness hang from noose straps
    Leaving room for mans affectations covered in pink
    Hairless remorse and perfumed submission
    Alighting onto heeled toes, peeping beggingly
    Tipped heels tensioning curves, forcing thrusts
    Staggered, swaying impulses skirt the senses
    Pierced candescence from nostril and ears tease
    Lashes float on cheeks of blushed oppression
    Blackened frames highlight distant eyes of hope
    Clips assess their hold on stockinged sentinels
    Bosoms created from pushed desires and wishes
    Her hair springing freely from cosseted curls
    Diamante danglers drive pangs into the heart
    Choker submission, a garrotte and reminder
    The dress hugs her trying to cuddle away pain
    Legs designed to infiltrate women’s passions
    Men despair at her inner sanctum of remorse
    Driven away from society as devil’s mutation
    She knows what she needs, nature’s hatred
    Absolved from gender assigned compatriots
    Removed from life’s generics and souls
    She wonders why physical tortures are all
    Realisation that sleep will change her again
    Rough, worn chins replace smooth grace
    Uncovered pores, void of powdered caress
    Adams apple chases Eve’s soft voice away
    Hair, relentlessly bound and gagged at nape
    Tough shirts and denim hatred sap love
    Barren holes cry for diamond crusted tears
    She awaits the grasp of her perfumed lover
    Time standing idly by as her gaze fades
    Nature missed its chance with him
    His anchor fixed in unhappy masculine seas
    Lakes of grace in his life offer placid lagoons
    He awaits another day, to release her
    She sits inside, crying and sad as life moves by.

    Hope you enjoyed it.

    Mel xxxxx
  • September 6, 2009 6:48 PM BST
    No one want to leave a comment?

    I do like to know what people think of my poetry as it gives me some insights into myself.

    Mel xx
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    September 7, 2009 4:57 PM BST
    Melissa
    Don't fret I liked your piece. Plus, I'm not much of a poetry reader.
    I'm reminded of the many feelings I get when I'm fully dressed and going out.
    I'm with you on the feeling of remorse when I have to go back to drap.
    hugs
    Gracie
  • September 8, 2009 6:25 AM BST
    Thanks Mary.

    The poetry lets me put feelings into words that can be more explicit and descriptive, rather than simply state the obvious. I understand what we all go through, but our trans-nature is often surrounded by controversy or mentioned in the same breath as self-harming or disability.
    I think the poem attempts to put the real feelings into perspective and I'm thinking of posting on some more general sites to see what reaction it gets.

    Mel xx