Beyond Belief

    • 33 posts
    March 16, 2010 6:02 PM GMT
    Beyond Belief

    Such complete unity of separation
    enfolded within a simple belief
    A dissymphonic continuum
    whose reflection of preference
    serially esculate unremitting anguish

    Belief obscures reality
    entwines lifes learned patterns
    a stupefying absurdity
    manufactured from artificiality
    exploitively seeking diversions.

    Yet in a moment of unfeigned surrender
    between com-pression and ex-pression
    a reciprocal tremendum
    resplendently springs its metanoia
    dissolving repeated cycles of confusion.

    Metmorphesized winged inner sense
    true Compassion arising in the tranquility
    as flowinging fractal waves delight
    the blissful birthing of Beingness
    in softly ecstatic nourishing Life.

    JVP (Janelle)
  • March 17, 2010 2:13 AM GMT
    Hi Janelle. I think your command of the English language is wonderful and I find everything you write to be intellectually challenging to me. I love it when I have to learn things to actually fully appreciate someone or something. You know Ithink I quite like youHighest Regards From Alison xx
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    • 1017 posts
    March 16, 2010 10:28 PM GMT
    Hi Janelle,

    Thanks for sharing your poem. Like your posts on religion/faith in other forums, there are a lot of ideas in a very short space. I've read it three times now and I'm finding more concepts with each reading. I suspect the same will continue to be true with additional readings.

    I especially like the title which can be interpreted in (at least) two ways.

    Best,
    Melody